Enjoy your writing, which is key. It’s a curious thing that your entire piece is void of any input from Mona and only includes your friend Gideon’s gushings from his burned ego, and you standing at a safe distance projecting all of you onto her. I enjoy the fiction, while appreciating the crumbs of nonfiction. Entertaining and enjoyed it, and the comments are provocative, and obviously you’ve touched many cords. Continue to strike those nerves! Write on!